If I Could, Would I? by Michale Mohr
Publisher: Self-published
Genre: Sci-fi/Fantasy, Time Travel, Contemporary, Paranormal
Rating: 3 stars
Reviewed by LavenderThe return of a long-lost dolphin necklace by a mysterious ethereal stranger and a magical accident hurl 60-year-old Emma Corbell back to the age of 17 with the memories of her entire life intact. Elated, she plots out how she will change the sad, unfulfilled life she’d been living into her senior years. She is immediately met by translucent beings who explain that her presence there is a mistake. She must return to her own time. Standing her ground, Emma refuses. The entities, unable to interfere with her free will, cannot force her to do so.
Emma’s extraordinary journey, guided by mystical beings and fueled by newfound personal power, become a battleground for the struggle of her lifetime. Each choice she makes in her second-chance existence carries a profound weight, rippling through time and shaping the lives of all those she encounters. The question remains: even if she returns to her old life, will that choice be enough to undo her missteps?
Will Emma navigate the pitfalls of her new mistaken time travel? Will she return to her own time? Or will she cease to exist in either one?
Michale Mohr’s If I Could, Would I? is a meditative and metaphysical twist on the classic “second chance at youth” tale. At its heart is Emma Corbell, a 60-year-old woman unexpectedly thrust back into her 17-year-old body—but with all the memories and regrets of her life intact. Her journey, catalyzed by the return of a long-lost dolphin necklace and a mysterious ethereal stranger, becomes a thought-provoking exploration of choice, regret, and free will.
The novel’s speculative premise is promising: what if you could re-live your life, fully aware of the mistakes you made the first time? Mohr leans into the philosophical and emotional implications of this question, often at the expense of pace. This is not a fast-moving narrative; rather, it’s contemplative, frequently revisiting the same internal dilemmas. There are moments of surprise and intrigue, but the novel often relies more on telling than showing, which may distance some readers from fully immersing in Emma’s experience.
Emma herself is a complex protagonist—sometimes endearing, sometimes self-involved. This ambiguity makes her feel more real, but it can also make it difficult to root for her. Her interactions with translucent, mystical beings add a layer of the surreal, grounding the novel in magical realism and prompting larger questions about fate, time, and identity.
While the narrative can be repetitive at times and might have benefited from tighter editing, Mohr does succeed in crafting a reflective character study with a strong emotional core. For readers who enjoy introspective time travel stories with metaphysical overtones—think The Midnight Library meets The Time Traveler’s Wife—this book may resonate deeply.
Verdict: A quiet, contemplative journey through time, regret, and personal power. Though uneven in pacing and occasionally over-expository, If I Could, Would I? offers a poignant look at the price—and potential—of a second chance.







































