Q&A with Chris Yiangou

Long and Short Reviews welcomes Chris Yiangou, author of WHEN THE NOISE FADES. Chris writes emotionally driven fiction about relationships, memory, loss and the choices that shape ordinary lives.

What advice would you give a new writer just starting out?

Begin with something specific enough to be seen or heard. A person standing outside a familiar door can be more compelling than a page explaining that life is complicated. Let the reader discover the complication through what that person does next. I would also suggest giving a first draft permission to be imperfect. A scene does not have to explain an entire life. Sometimes its job is simply to make one hesitation, one misunderstanding or one small choice feel true.

What, in your opinion, are the most important elements of good writing?

Emotional honesty, attention and restraint. By emotional honesty, I do not mean that characters must understand themselves perfectly. Claire often does not. I mean that their reactions should make sense even when they are contradictory. Attention makes a scene particular: a chipped serving dish is different from a general statement about nostalgia. Restraint leaves readers room to recognise things for themselves. The sentence after a revealing gesture can sometimes explain away the very feeling the gesture has already created.

How do you develop your plot and characters?

A useful way to think about a character is to ask what they believe their job in other people’s lives to be, and what happens when that job changes. Claire is accustomed to anticipating needs. Her daughter leaving home unsettles not just her routine but her understanding of herself. In this book, the practical task of clearing the house gives that emotional question a shape. Objects require decisions, decisions bring relationships into the room, and those relationships make the next apparently simple decision less simple.

What comes first, the plot or characters?

For a story like When the Noise Fades, character is the centre of gravity. Clearing a house is the visible action, but it becomes a story because of what the house means to Claire and the different meanings it has for everyone else. Another person could perform the same task and produce an entirely different book. That does not make plot unimportant. The deadline and the rooms that must be emptied keep the story moving; Claire’s responses make that movement matter.

Tell us something about your newest release that is NOT in the blurb.

There is a serving dish with a blue rim that carries far more emotional weight than its eventual price in a charity shop suggests. To Claire it holds years of family Christmases; to someone else it is a useful dish in good condition. The scene has humour, but it also asks an uncomfortable question about the stories we attach to objects. The same thing can be precious, replaceable and slightly ridiculous, depending on who is holding it. That tension runs through the novella.

How do you come up with the titles to your books?

A title should open a question rather than close the book into an explanation. In When the Noise Fades, the noise can be read as the constant traffic of duties, messages and other people’s needs. When some of it quietens, Claire does not immediately find serenity. She finds questions she has had less room to hear. I like the space in that title: it can suggest relief, loneliness, uncertainty or possibility. Those meanings do not have to cancel one another out.

What is the hardest part about writing for you?

For this kind of fiction, the difficult balance is making a small change meaningful without announcing its importance too loudly. A pause before replying to a message can matter, but the reader needs to understand the habits behind that pause. Too little context and nothing seems to happen; too much explanation and the scene becomes an argument about its own significance. The standard I would aim for is that readers feel the difference before the narration asks them to name it.

What is the most surprising thing you discovered while writing your book?

The surprise worth talking about in this story is how little the value of an object can tell us about the difficulty of parting with it. A cheap mug or damaged key ring can resist every sensible decision. That opens another surprise: people in the same family are not necessarily trying to preserve the same past. Margaret can be ready to leave something that Claire still wants to hold. Neither response has to be dishonest or unloving. Their disagreement makes the memory more human.

How do you do research for your books?

For a contemporary story like this, the useful research questions are often practical and behavioural. How does a house feel when the familiar objects have gone? What can a brief message communicate, and what might an anxious parent imagine around it? What happens to a possession once it enters a charity shop? The standard is not to turn those observations into a report. It is to make the circumstances convincing enough that the reader can concentrate on the people. Technical accuracy and emotional plausibility serve different but complementary purposes.

When writing descriptions of your hero/ine, what feature do you start with?

Behaviour can introduce a person more vividly than an inventory of features. Claire first appears trying to open a familiar door whose small trick her hand remembers. That tells us something about her relationship with the house before we need to know much about her appearance. Physical details still matter, but they can arrive through attention, discomfort or another person’s reaction. The question is not simply what someone looks like. It is what this person, in this moment, would notice about themselves or someone else.

Are you a plotter or a pantser?

I would rather think of structure and freedom as partners than competing identities. A story needs enough direction for its choices to have consequences, but a character also needs room to respond in a way that is not merely convenient for an outline. In this novella, the house-clearing task provides a clear external structure. Within it, conversations and objects can shift the emotional direction. The useful test is whether a scene belongs to the people in it as well as to the plan for the book.

Ebook or print? And why?

They make different kinds of reading possible, and I would not want to prescribe a single right way to encounter a story. An ebook can make it easy to carry a book and adjust the text to a comfortable size. Print offers the physical experience of a particular object that stays with you. That is an especially interesting distinction for a novella concerned with possessions and memory. What matters most to me in this context is not the format but whether the reader finds a way into Claire’s world.

How do you keep your writing different from all the others that write in this particular genre?

I would not claim that the book occupies a territory no one else has explored. Family, identity and change belong to many writers. The distinction has to come through the particular people and the attention given to their contradictions. Claire can be capable and lost, loving and intrusive, amused by herself and genuinely upset. Her life is not resolved by a conventional new-romance ending. The quieter question is whether she can make room for herself without treating the people she loves as obstacles to her freedom.

Tell us about a favorite character from a book.

From this novella, Margaret is a character worth spending time with. Her practicality is funny, but it also unsettles Claire’s expectations about what leaving a family home should look like. Claire anticipates a large emotional moment; Margaret may instead worry about the boiler or the placement of cutlery. That does not mean she has no feelings. It means her daughter cannot always read them through the script she has prepared. Margaret helps keep the story from belonging to only one generation’s version of events.

Do you use a pen name? If so, how did you come up with it?

I publish as Chris Yiangou, and that is the public author identity I use for my books and conversations with readers. I prefer to keep the personal background of the name private rather than make it part of the story around the books. The distinction gives the work room to stand on its own. Readers do not need access to a writer’s private family or professional life to form a meaningful relationship with the characters. I would rather invite attention towards the fiction itself.

If you were to write a series of novels, what would it be about?

Hypothetically, I would be interested in connected novels in which a place or relationship passes between different people’s perspectives. A person who appears difficult in one book might become the centre of another, and the reader would have to reconsider what they thought they knew. The connection would be emotional rather than a promise of larger and larger incidents. A shared history can support very different stories. That is a possible direction to imagine, not an announcement of a series already planned or underway.

What are you passionate about these days?

The territory this book opens is the value of ordinary lives as material for fiction. A daughter leaving home, a friendship revisited or an old house being emptied may not look extraordinary from the outside. From within a life, each can alter the way a person understands what comes next. I am interested in giving those experiences attention without insisting that every difficult moment become a lesson. Affection, humour and uncertainty can occupy the same scene. The story does not have to choose only one of them.

What is something you’d like to accomplish in your writing career next year?

A meaningful aim would be to build more genuine connections between the work and its readers. That could mean a thoughtful review, a reading-group discussion or a conversation about a character whose choices were not easy to agree with. I would rather frame that as a direction than make a public promise about an unannounced release or a particular number of sales. Reaching more people matters, but so does allowing them to respond independently, including in ways the author did not anticipate.

Could you ever co-author a book with someone? If so, who would you choose, and what would you write?

In principle, collaboration could be interesting where the difference between two perspectives becomes a strength of the book. A story told through people who remember the same event differently would be one possible starting point. I would not name a collaborator or imply that a project exists when this is only a hypothetical question. The important fit would be a shared commitment to the characters and enough openness to let a scene improve through disagreement. Two names on a cover should reflect a genuinely shared work.

At forty-seven, Claire Bennett knows how to be useful. Knowing who she is without that constant usefulness is harder. Her daughter has left for university, her marriage has ended, and her mother has moved out of the seaside house where Claire grew up. Now Claire must sort through what remains.

There are boxes to fill, cupboards to empty and possessions that refuse to stay ordinary. A familiar mug, a childhood key ring and the return of an old friend reopen questions she has kept beneath the practical business of living.

When the Noise Fades is a quiet, character-driven novella about family, memory, friendship and the uneasy freedom of change. What do we keep when the roles that once defined us begin to fall away?

How I Got Into the Writing Gig by Jon Ketzner – Guest Blog and Giveaway

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Let me explain how I got into the writing gig. For years the Maryland Writers Association sponsored a monthly challenge. Each month the MWA published in newspapers around the State, short bios of writers with Maryland connections. These writers could be contemporary or long dead. Included in the bio would be a listing of their significant works, a discussion of their styles and genres and their connection to Maryland. At the end of the article would be a prompt challenging writer to write the first 100 words of a new work based on the particulars of the prompt but written in the style of the recognized writer. Selected 100-word entries would be selected by the MWA and published in the local papers the next month, along with the new bio.

I submitted entries for many years…approximately 70 in total…and usually mine was selected by the MWA and published in my local newspaper. Eventually, the fellow who ran the monthly challenge, Jim Brewster, who was also a small, independent publisher, invited me to expand several of my 100-word story beginnings into completed short stories and he would publish them in anthologies. So, in 2023 I published my first title…” Hillbilly Anthology” …a collection of eight short stories. Then in 2024, I published a second anthology of eight stories…” Where’s That Bastard Owen.”

In 2025, I wanted to try a novel. As I was brainstorming for an idea, I realized that I had a few stories in my published anthologies that had similar characters and narrative stylings and I believed I could use them as the initial building blocks of a novel. It worked great and I eventually wrote my first novel…” Bad Consequence: tales of an Amish samurai” …about a young Amish girl who goes out on her Rumspringa and never returns, being recruited and trained by the NSA, as an assassin. This novel was published by Jim Brewster’s J2B Publishing like my earlier anthologies.

Then in 2026, I decided to write another novel. Again, I had stories in my short story anthologies that coincidentally had tangential plot incidents around the Kennedy assassination. As with my first novel, I repurposed these short stories as building blocks for my new novel. Jim Brewster believed my new novel might not fit the stylings of J2B, which publishes mostly children’s and Christian books. He hooked me up with Austin Camacho. So, on September 1st my new novel… “Coincidence” …dropped. It is an historiographic metafiction novel centered by the assassination of President Johnny F. Kennedy in Dallas in 1963. My metafiction device is an all-knowing narrator who steers the narrative through flas-backs and side-stories that eventually come together in Dallas.

One reviewer referred to my novel as cheeky and that’s probably a good descriptor. I like crisp, amusing dialogue to carry much of the plot. I am not given to flowery prose, or wordy exposition. I shoot for a quick, crisp, good read. I constantly edit with the desire to reduce word count. The Kennedy Assassination details are well-known so I don’t insult my readers by overselling the well-known bits. The historical figures involved in this sad event…JFK, LBJ, Jackie, Aristotle Onassis, RFK, SR, Marilyn Monroe, Joe DiMaggio, etc…were all bigger than life. Their journeys and personalities are so incredible that the most believable characters in my novel are the fictional ones. It’s crazy.

Some might believe that I’m a little mean with many of the well-known characters. I don’t agree. These folks were so young, and alive, and vital and frisky that it’s not possible to tell a credible story about this time without capturing that element. I think my novel is actually a Valentine to those people and times. They were fascinating and historical and their warts only serve to put their distinctive selves in high relief. The book is humorous and accurate as to any historical detail not intended to be fictional. Minor historical figures have been given aliases, often the names of friends and relatives of mine. some characters and events have been conflated or tweaked, but the principal history is solid. I am very pleased with the novel.

My next novel, a police procedural to be called “Hardass,” is also going to repurpose a few of my short stories to help build the narrative. I hope to publish it in 2027.

On the eve of President John F. Kennedy’s final trip to Dallas, an irreverent narrator from the Ether begins to reveal the hidden chain of events that history never recorded. Spanning decades and weaving together Hollywood legends, political dynasties, secret affairs, and forgotten tragedies, Coincidence imagines how seemingly unrelated lives become entangled in the most infamous assassination of the twentieth century. From Joseph P. Kennedy and Gloria Swanson to Jackie Kennedy, Mary Pinchot Meyer, and the young Lee Harvey Oswald, every choice, passion, and betrayal sends ripples through time. Behind every headline lies another story, and every story hides a secret long buried. As the strands converge on November 22, 1963, the line between fate and accident begins to blur. Rich in historical detail and provocative speculation, Coincidence asks: was it really coincidence at all?

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President Kennedy huddled with Dave Powers and Kenneth O’Donnell in the sixth-floor small conference room. Secret Service agents circled unobtrusively among the men. Vice President Lyndon Johnson orbited the group, along with miscellaneous officials and politicians.

At 8:45, the assembled high muckety-mucks elevatored to the lobby and strolled into the light rain. A large crowd had assembled in the parking lot. A flatbed truck served as a makeshift stage.

After unremarkable remarks by two of the locals, President Kennedy climbed onto the flatbed with a steroid enabled limber, made more uncomfortable by his back brace. He wore no protection against the rain. He spoke without notes.

“There are no faint hearts in Fort Worth, and I appreciate you being here this morning. Mrs. Kennedy is organizing herself. It takes longer, but, of course, she looks better than we do when she does it.”

Kennedy spoke extemporaneously for five minutes congratulating Fort Worth for its contributions to America’s defense and Texas’ efforts on behalf of the Space program. His youth and easy confidence stood in stark contrast to the buttoned-up, old farts who surrounded him atop the flatbed.

The parking lot crowd applauded with, as JFK might say, great vigor. The President smiled, waved and with Dave Power’s discrete assistance eased down from the flatbed. Still on schedule, the posse of politicians, assistants and security strode to the large ballroom of the Texas Hotel for breakfast.

About the Author Jon Ketzner was born in Cumberland, Maryland in the lovely Appalachian foothills. He grew up in Baltimore then graduated from Towson University with a degree in mathematics and went on to a long career as a consulting actuary. For many years, Jon and his family lived in Bryn Mawr, Pennsylvania before moving back to Cumberland in 1990.

As a recovering actuary and inspired by the Maryland Writers Association’s “Notable Authors” monthly challenges, Jon decided to try his hand at writing and give his left-brain side a rest. He cites as influences: Henry Fielding, Joseph Heller, Gregory McDonald, and Tim Dorsey.

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Heidenröslein: The Little Rose on the Heath by Christopher Whittaker – Spotlight and Giveaway

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Two men. Two worlds.

One war that will remake them both.

Peter Schiller, a disciplined officer from privilege, is trained to lead—but not for what war truly demands.

Günther Klein, a working-class recruit, is thrown into the trenches and forced to learn fast or die.

In the mud and ruin of the Great War, rank and class begin to dissolve. Orders blur into instinct. Honour bends under necessity. What remains is survival—and the thin, unspoken bond forged between two men who should never have met.

But war does not end when the guns fall silent.

Heidenröslein is a powerful, unflinching story of war, brotherhood, and the quiet, irreversible cost of becoming what the battlefield demands.

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1914

The kitchen was small, but it carried the quiet dignity of people who owned little and cared for everything.

Against one wall stood a heavy sideboard of dark timber, polished by years of careful hands rather than luxury. Fine China sat arranged behind glass doors, each piece positioned with deliberate precision. The plates were reserved for Sundays, feast days, or visits important enough to justify the risk of using something fragile. Crystal wine glasses hung above them, catching the weak morning light and holding it in muted amber reflections.

Nothing in the room was fashionable.

Everything in it was treasured.

In the center stood a small round table worn smooth at the edges where elbows, plates, and years of conversation had rubbed away the varnish. The stove and icebox stood side by side beneath the far wall, black iron beside chipped white enamel, both old enough to have become part of the family itself. Beneath the kitchen window ran a long washing trough, damp to the touch, carrying the faint scent of soap, starch, and boiled cabbage that seemed to linger permanently in the wood.

At it stood Frau Klein.

She held a cup beneath the water, slowly moving the cloth around its rim although it had already been cleaned twice over. Her hands worked from instinct now, broad and reddened from years of labour, fingers thickened from kneading dough, wringing cloth, hauling water, carrying coal, and doing every invisible task required to keep a household alive.

She had once been handsome in the soft, rosy-cheeked way of country girls.

Now life had settled heavily upon her.

About the Author: Chris lives in Perth, Western Australia with his wife Dianne.

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A Proof of Love by Merida Johns – Interview and Giveaway

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If you could have one paranormal ability, what would it be?

There are so many types of paranormal abilities—telepathy, precognition, channeling, among others. Because curiosity is one of my top strengths and I like to peek behind the curtains, astral projection or the ability to explore different planes of existence would be enticing.

What is one thing your readers would be most surprised to learn about you?

I didn’t start my fiction writing career until I retired. I’m proof that it’s never too late to follow a new path and find new, interesting, and perspective-changing experiences.

When writing descriptions of your hero/ine, what feature do you start with?

In my novels, I usually introduce my protagonist using interiority and/or action. This allows readers to form an immediate bond with the protagonist, immersing them in the protagonist’s perspective through the protagonist’s thoughts and actions. For example, in A Proof of Love, the reader is introduced to Katie Blake in the Prologue through her recollections of her younger self and the motivation that leads her to seize the day and write about the special people in her life, ones her readers will remember.

Are you a plotter or a pantser?

I’d describe myself as a plot-plantser.

Before I begin writing, I have a story in mind—I know the general character arc that shows the protagonist’s internal transformation. I’ve imagined the turning points, the character’s confrontation with her darkest moments, and the change that occurs by the end of the story. Then I get to work fleshing out the important secondary characters, including using inanimate objects and locations as supporting characters.

After I have the story in my mind, I write what I term a mini-story, including a few paragraphs on the story’s theme(s) that sketch the plot, conflict, and resolution. Then, in the next section, I elaborate on the powerful influences/influencers in the story, followed by descriptions of the strong challengers, the major conflict, and the resolution.

The most useful technique I use to develop the characters is writing a character profile for each in the story. In this profile, I identify elements such as physical descriptions, the home or neighborhood they live in, close relationships, family members and background, gender relationships, job, dress style, favorite foods, regrets, best qualities, worst qualities, religious and philosophical beliefs, and so on.

To be sure, though, nothing is set in stone. My characters and events evolve, and each day as I write about them, the characters take me by surprise with their actions and thoughts, and unexpected events surface without warning!
For tracking characters and events, I develop a timeline and a list of characters and their relationship(s) with each other. Both of these will be revised and edited throughout the novel’s development.

I maintain a style sheet while I’m working on my novels. Style sheets are usually used by copyeditors, but I have found this tool essential in keeping track of style and usage for my own purposes. For example, I will list words that I always hyphenate or capitalize, notate how I treat inner thoughts by using italics, not quotations, and so on. The style sheet also lists all references I have used for fact-checking and fact-finding. When I hand the manuscript to the copyeditor, the style sheet serves as a communication tool, making life much easier for both of us.

Did you learn anything from writing this book? If so, what?

From a craft standpoint, I learned that using multiple points of view (POV) can enhance a story by providing readers with a variety of perspectives on characters’ emotions, motivations, and internal conflicts. I also think that using multiple POV can increase tension and suspense, revealing information to the reader while keeping other characters in the dark.

From a personal growth perspective, A Proof of Love helped me reflect on the relationship between love and grief, and, as Katie says, “Neither grief nor love has respect for time—there are no sunsets, no last acts, no grand finales.”

A fictional story with a memoir overlay as narrator Katie Blake reflects on life in small town America and the principles, influences, and big personalities she wants you to never forget.

It’s Memorial Day weekend, 2009, and the town gossips have their shorts in a twist about a mysterious newcomer who wears tie-dye, colorful headbands, clunky necklaces, and rings on every finger.“Who installs a ceiling fan on a Victorian porch?” cries Ned Boomer, Woodburg’s grumpiest man, and the town gossips concur, “She must be a hippie, witch, or maybe worse . . . a socialist.”

Hell-bent on preventing a neighborhood blow-up, precocious, nine-year-old Katie Blake launches a covert investigation to gather the truth about the enigmatic Rose. But when she discovers a decades-old secret binding her, Rose, and bad-tempered Ned Boomer, her world takes a turn.

Penning a memoir sixteen years later, Katie is forced to reconsider whether the real proof of love was in preventing a neighborhood war or finding friendship and comfort among three unlikely grief-stricken souls who should never be forgotten.

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She gazes at that old maple tree and makes us a promise. “One day . . . I’ll write about the special people in my life so you will know them, and they will never be forgotten.”

But Gram went to heaven before her one day came, and her stories, told in her own words, are lost forever.

Fifteen years later, I’ve learned that one day’s promise is not assured. Before it’s lost . . . So, I’m seizing that one day to write about the special people in my life, so that you will know them, and they will never be forgotten. This is A Proof of Love.

Kathleen Claire Blake, Memorial Day, 2024

About the Author:
At heart, I am a storyteller who writes women’s fiction and stories of courage and discovery, showcasing the protagonist’s journey toward a more fulfilled self.

My passion is writing women’s fiction and exploring the human experience—how ordinary people tackle challenges, endure sorrow and betrayal, wrestle with doubt, and act on their aspirations to achieve flourishing lives.
My insight into the power of fiction came during a conference call in late 2017 with a group of fellow life coaches. “What would it be like to help women and men achieve a flourishing life through storytelling?” I asked them.

After that phone call, I got started answering that question. The result was my debut novel titled Blackhorse Road, a compelling story of womanhood and the power of choice, gratitude, and forgiveness, published July 21, 2020, by Coffee Cup Press, followed by Flower Girl (2022), Flawless Witness (2023), and now A Proof of Love (2026)

Before embracing writing fiction, I was the author of health informatics and leadership textbooks. Later, I put my leadership experience to use as a leadership coach, focusing on supporting others to fulfill their leadership and economic potential. My range of nonfiction is available on my Amazon Author Page.

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Advice for New Authors by p.m. terrell – Guest Blog and Giveaway

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My first nonfiction book was published in 1984, and my first fiction book in 2002. I’ve seen a lot of changes in the publishing industry over the years, including book chain mergers, the rise of digital media, and the mainstreaming of self-publishing.

However, one factor remains constant: write the best story you can.

Before committing to a story, do some market research. This will prevent you from writing a story that nobody will care about. Take classes and learn from everything you read. I often learn the most from terribly written stories, as it shouts to me what not to do. Make the characters multi-layered and complex, even if they are minor characters. Write the setting so the reader feels as if they are there, standing in the middle of it. Make the events that occur resonate with the reader. Create a story that is unforgettable.

The days of a rough manuscript being discovered in a slush pile and polished to perfection by a team of editors are long gone. The largest publishers have replaced the slush pile and interns with third-party literary agents who will only recommend stories that are near-perfect and about which they are passionate. They have become the gatekeepers for the pinnacle of publishers.

There is an ever-growing number of small- to midsize publishers. Do your homework; some are better options than the largest publishers, while others are individuals in a spare bedroom.

Do not rely on family or friends to tell you how great your story is. Get the best editor you can afford. Every punctuation mark and every sentence structure must be perfect. I am comma-challenged; I was taught throughout my school years to place a comma anyplace where I take a breath. Apparently, I breathe at the wrong times. A good editor will catch each one.

If you plan to self-publish, you should understand that there is a world of difference between being a writer and being a publisher. Simply uploading your book online won’t sell it. Learn as much as you can about the publishing industry, marketing, and advertising online and off.

Often, traditional publishers and moviemakers will pay attention to self-published books that are rising in various bestseller lists. The more you understand about the industry, the better positioned you will be for success.

Padlocked is an epic historical and visionary novel that follows the lives of a group of ordinary people who find themselves in extraordinary, life-altering circumstances as Nazi Germany invades Poland in 1939.

Two foreign photojournalists, an American and a Spaniard, are trapped between armies at Festungsfront Oder-Warthe-Bogen, along Poland’s western border with Germany. It is Hank’s last overseas assignment, and he’s been counting the days until he can go home to North Carolina to be with his family. Rafe fled Spain after the dictator, Francisco Franco, targeted his family. The experience changed him, and he now sees the rise of fascism in Europe as a battle between good and evil. They will find themselves embedded with the Polish, Nazi, and Soviet forces at varying times, forcing them to face moral and ethical decisions in their struggles to survive.

A young woman is separated from her sister in Warsaw as the Nazis encircle it. Agata made a vow that she would return to take Elsa to safety, but soldiers and barbed wire prevent her from entering the newly established Jewish sector. She is consumed with guilt over their separation, and when she discovers her sister was taken by train to a work camp near Krakow, she navigates her dangerous, war-torn country in search of her. Her quest will force her to confront a Hell on Earth to find her.

A young man joins the Jungdeutsche Partei, or the Young German Party. Once bullied as a child, Max’s new affiliations promote him to a position where he can dictate life or death and settle scores. In order to thrive under Nazi occupation, he makes daily choices that legitimize brutality and erode humanitarian principles and scruples.

While they don’t know one another at the start of their journeys, each will make decisions that have the power to transform them and place them on paths that ultimately converge on January 27, 1945, as the 60th Army of the First Ukrainian Front opened the gates to Auschwitz-Birkenau for all the world to witness.

This is ultimately a story about the strength of love, courage, faith, and resilience in the face of unimaginable hatred and obsession with power, and how every decision we make places us further along specific paths.

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The throngs pushed her this way and that, so she felt like she was attempting to run through thick mud. She made slow progress, and yet, something inside her propelled her forward. She reached the end of the block to find cars racing past, ignoring intersection rules, and she hesitated to get her breath. Someone from behind pushed her to the ground, stomping over her dress as she lay prone, scores of feet scuffling over her while she tried vainly to rise.

A hand reached through the crowd. Amidst the shouting, his words were louder and deeper than the others. “Get back!” he shouted as he grasped her by the waist and hauled her to her feet. “Get back!”

As the mob stepped back and then rushed forward in another direction, the man pulled her away from the others. It was easy to see why the crowd had obliged him and given her space. He was a soldier in the Polish Army, his cropped, sandy hair almost hidden beneath a crisp cap bearing the Polish White Eagle. His trim figure was clothed in an olive uniform, and he wore a wide black belt and knee-length black boots.

“Are you alright?” he asked.

“Fine, thank you.” Agata wiped her hair off her forehead and was surprised to find pebbles from the ground in her hair.

“Where were you going?” he asked.

“I—” She hesitated. “I don’t know.”

“The school—”

“No. I need to leave the Jewish sector. I need to be across town.”

“Is that where you live?”

Agata looked around her in impatience. “I am wasting time here. Thank you for assisting me to my feet, but I must go. The Germans—”

“The Germans are coming,” he finished. “And we are digging in. You will be safe if you remain in Warsaw, Jewish sector or no.”

“Then, thank you, and good-bye.” She turned to run, but he held out his hand and stopped her.

“Do you have an address where you are going? I have a motorbike. I can get you there faster than you can run.”

“Shouldn’t you be somewhere right now? Like, fighting the Germans?”

He laughed so unexpectedly that Agata was shocked. “There will be time enough for that, don’t you worry. My name is Piotr. Come. My motorbike is over there, on the opposite corner.”

As Agata rushed across the busy street with him and settled behind him on the motorbike, she took a long look at the school down the street. It was difficult to know what was happening as people rushed in all directions at once. Her eyes fell on the top step, at two figures holding one another so tightly they appeared as if they might be one. A tear rolled down her cheek as the motorbike zoomed to life, and she held onto Piotr as they took off. Soon, the people blended behind them while the memory of Ira and Elsa on the step seared into her mind. “I will be back tomorrow,” she thought. “I will be back, just as I promised.”

About the Author: My full name is Patricia McClelland Terrell, and I have been writing under the pen name p.m.terrell ever since a publisher presented me with my first fiction book cover. The graphic designer had also entered my 026/05/author-image-3-239×300.jpg” alt=”” width=”239″ height=”300″ class=”alignleft size-medium wp-image-132842name in lower-case letters; my editor hated it, and I loved it. It’s been p.m.terrell ever since.

I began writing when I was nine years old, inspired by a schoolteacher and elementary school principal. Scott-Foresman published my first book, a computer instructional for universities, in 1984. Scott-Foresman, Dow-Jones (Richard D. Irwin branch), Palari Publishing, Paralee Press, and Drake Valley Press have published 27 books to date.

Before embarking on a full-time writing career, I founded McClelland Enterprises, Inc., in the Washington, D.C., area in 1984, specializing in workplace computer instruction. I opened another business, Continental Software Development Corporation, in 1994, which focused on custom application development, programming, website design and development, and cybersecurity.

I was honored to be the first female President of the Chesterfield County/Colonial Heights Crime Solvers. Since moving to North Carolina, I served on the boards of the Robeson County Friends of the Library and the Robeson County Arts Council.

I launched The Book ‘Em Foundation with Waynesboro, Virginia, Police Officer Mark Kearney, and assisted in Virginia, New Hampshire, and South Carolina events before establishing the Annual Book ‘Em North Carolina Writers Conference and Book Fair, chairing it for several years before turning it over to Robeson Community College in Lumberton, NC.

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My Writing Process by Jessica Rakus – Guest Post and Giveaway

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I started writing as a teenager, the summer before I started high school. It was a magical time where I could write instead of paying attention in class, bring my notebook to my evening job at Walmart and jot some lines when things were quiet in the fabric department, and stay up until three in the morning reworking random scenes. Those were the days!

Now, in my mid-forties, with two busy kids, finding a single moment to even breathe is special. Hearing my own thoughts, let alone the thoughts of my characters, is a bonus.

This has obviously changed my writing process – I take the chance to write any time I can get it, including jotting down a few lines on my phone or writing on the back of a receipt I dug out of my purse. But since that becomes a disaster, I have to corral myself a bit.

I’m very much a pantser when it comes to writing, so while I have a general idea of where I want the story to end up, I mostly just let the characters get there how they want (or sometimes they end up somewhere completely different, and that’s okay). This means I can’t just write scenes willy nilly as they come to me. This has ended up in so many situations where I write a scene I love, and I can’t make it fit with where the story starts going, and then I have to set that scene aside and just read it by myself and think of what could have been. I have to write the whole story in order, beginning to end. Once that’s done, I can slow down and go back in and find moments that need more and let myself toss random lines in, or remember that I really wanted a scene where two of my characters meet for the first time simply because I think that moment would be funny, even though it doesn’t serve the plot, given that the whole story happened without it.

I do find that I hit a wall around the 75% finished first draft stage, which I think is tied to writing the story start to finish – I would argue the 75% mark of most books is where the book hits a wall. It’s usually a moment of calm before the storm that is the climax of the book. The climax is the fun part! The part where everything is going well for the characters is boring! Let’s ruin their lives, come on! But all in all, this process works for me, and it got me here to Haven Strong. I hope you love the book, and the journey they took me on.

Josephine Grant lives a charmed life – a husband, three perfect children, strong bonds with family and friends in the small town where she’s lived her entire life. She’s the helper, the hostess, the one who always shows up. The person who can do it all.

Then the bus carrying her son’s basketball team crashes, and Jo’s husband and son are among the lives lost. Now she has a new identity. Widow. Single mother. Woman who lost everything. Grief begins to tear apart the place that’s always been her home. Infighting among friends. Gossip and rumors. Wounds that may never heal and bonds that just might.

Now Jo has to rebuild her life, but as the person who thinks of herself as the helper, asking others to help hold her together is impossible. Jo must learn to lean on others as she learns to stand on her own.

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“Josephine Grant?”

The grocery bag in my hands threatened to fall. He was here for me.

I’d known it since I first saw him, and praying I was wrong had done nothing.

I swallowed hard before turning. “Yes?”

He didn’t speak again until he’d navigated the driveway and stood in front of me. I set down the bag of groceries; my shaking hands and knees had rendered holding things impossible.

“Could we step inside for a moment to speak?” he asked.

I glanced toward the door. “My daughters are inside.”

He nodded, seeming to understand my concern. Whatever he had to say, he didn’t want them to overhear any more than I did.

“Mrs. Grant, I’m so sorry. There was an accident earlier today involving a bus. Two of the people on the bus were identified as Stephen and Matthew Grant.”

No. No no no.

“We’re still trying to figure out exactly what happened, but emergency personnel at the scene did everything they could for everyone. I’m sorry to tell you they passed away at the scene.”

My legs gave out and I collapsed to the ground. Cold seeped through the knees of my jeans, but I didn’t care. My head dropped, my forehead settling into the gray slush that lined the driveway.

The officer crouched beside me as a sob burst from my throat.

“Is there someone who can come stay with you?”

Crumbled on the ground, I struggled to extract my cell phone from my back pocket, but I lacked the strength to pull myself up. Finally I got it. Through the blur of tears, I fumbled to find the button to make a phone call. Instead I landed on random apps, frustration adding to the crush in my chest.

The officer took my phone gently from my hand. “What name?”

“Esther Franklin,” I replied. “My mother.”

He stepped away, and without someone standing over me, I could no longer stop the tears. I sobbed into the cold gray concrete, praying my daughters wouldn’t come looking for me.

About the Author Jessica Rakus is a debut novelist, after many, many years of writing practice. She currently lives in Louisiana, after living briefly in seven other states.

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The Reluctant Patriot by Susan Lohafer – Spotlight

Not every part of the Civil War was loud or immediate. In some places, it unfolded slowly—through divided households, strained trust, and the growing sense that staying neutral might not be possible for long. In The Reluctant Patriot, Susan Lohafer focuses on that kind of tension as it builds.

In East Tennessee during the Civil War, divisions within communities created an environment where loyalties were constantly questioned. Harrison Self, a farmer determined to remain neutral, believes he can keep his life separate from the conflict surrounding him.

That belief begins to collapse when his son is linked to a Unionist conspiracy to burn Confederate railroad bridges. The resulting arrests and trials bring the conflict directly into his life, exposing him to suspicion and scrutiny.

Accused of treason, Harry is drawn into military courts where outcomes depend heavily on testimony and shifting allegiances. In a system where justice is uncertain and trust is fragile, he must navigate a reality that offers little stability. As the situation unfolds, the story explores how neutrality, once seen as protection, becomes something far more complicated.

A father. A son. A war that turns neighbor against neighbor.

In the divided mountains of East Tennessee, loyalty isn’t a matter of politics-it’s a matter of survival.

Harrison Self is a farmer who wants nothing to do with the Civil War. He believes in staying out of it, keeping his land, and protecting his family. But when his teenage son is drawn into a dangerous Unionist plot to burn Confederate railroad bridges, that distance collapses overnight.

Within days, Harry is arrested, accused of treason, and thrown into a system where trials are little more than theater and a single accusation can end in the noose.

What follows is not a battlefield story, but something closer, more dangerous. A world where neighbors watch each other too closely, where loyalties shift without warning, and where survival depends on choices no one should have to make.

Inspired by the true story of Harrison Self and the 1861 East Tennessee bridge burnings, The Reluctant Patriot is a work of Civil War historical fiction that brings to life a lesser-known chapter of American history-one where the war was fought not just between armies, but within families and communities.

As violence closes in and trust erodes, Harry is forced to confront the question he’s spent his life avoiding: what do you stand for when staying neutral is no longer an option?

Rich in historical detail and grounded in real events, this is a story of divided loyalties, moral courage, and the quiet, devastating cost of war-perfect for readers drawn to character-driven historical fiction and overlooked stories from the Civil War era.

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As he stepped carefully among the saddled horses, Harry could hear them moving their hobbled weight in the gloom. Their warm breath clouded the November chill. Here and there, he stroked a muscled neck, lifting the nap of coarse hair. In the dark, he was wary of their stamping hooves. “Pay me no mind,” he whispered. Time was short, and yet he slowed in their midst, feeling their inner heat, their careless strength, their indifference to the road they traveled. They were as tolerant of him as if he’d once had four legs.

Peering up into the heavens, he lost his gaze in the liquid dark, hoping to catch God’s eye. All he saw was the paleness above the tree line. All he knew was what he’d learned in half a century. Must be about nine, he judged, as if he’d heard nature’s clock chime. Then the pain flooded back, gushing through his veins and pooling in his stomach. How much simpler it would be if his toes were mashed to pulp. His heart on a spit wouldn’t satisfy Corniah if he failed to bring their son back.

Harry crossed the patch of swept earth and mounted the single stair. He leaned into the solid wood he’d helped Jake saw and plane and settle into place on hinges strong enough to stop a bull. The planks gave an inch, then resisted, heaving with the crowd on the other side.

Harrison Self firmed his jaw. This was his brother-in-law’s house, where, on any other day, he could enter without knocking. From his own front door, it was only a mile’s walk, though tonight he’d forced Castor to a gallop that surprised them both. Nor had he expected what followed. To be standing on this doorstep, fighting to gain a toehold, was like milking a wooden cow. If you had sense, you lost interest.

But he couldn’t give up. They had his son in there, he was sure of it, and there was no going home without Hugh. When an opening appeared, he lodged his foot in the crack. They would not keep him out, no, they would not, though earlier in the day he’d refused to be one of them, said it was none of his affair. “Only a fool lights a match in his own barn,” he’d said, thinking he had clinched the argument.

Yet his son had trailed after them, so here was Harry, come to pull the child back, lest he burn himself.

No one’s fault, then, but Hugh’s, that his father looked ridiculous as he fought with the stubborn door, though no one saw him but the waiting horses. It was a sizable herd, and he reckoned most of the able-bodied men of Greeneville must be visiting the Harmons.

About the Author: Susan Lohafer is the author of The Reluctant Patriot, a historical novel based on true events from the Civil War in East Tennessee.

A graduate of Harvard University (B.A., magna cum laude), Stanford University (M.A. in Creative Writing), and New York University (Ph.D. in American Literature), she spent her academic career at the University of Iowa, where she specialized in short fiction theory and narrative structure.

Her previous books include Coming to Terms with the Short Story and Reading for Storyness: Preclosure Theory, Empirical Poetics, and Culture in the Short Story, as well as the co-edited volume Short Story Theory at a Crossroads. Her shorter works have appeared in publications such as The Southern Review, and a 2011 essay was on the ‘Notable’ list in The Best American Essays.

She lives in Tennessee.

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Winter Blogfest: Michael DeStefano

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The Roadside Oasis

    The sign would have read “The Snowshoe” but for a burned-out bulb. Inside, a kindly woman greets a traveler. Her tag says Regina. Regina’s tone possesses all the tranquility a weary traveler could hope for. He sags as one might when submitting to another worthy of trust.

    “A bit road-weary?” Regina intones. The traveler suffers a lapse in deportment. The consequence is laughter, contrary to humor. “Begging your pardon; did I say something humorous?” Regina maintains her graciousness, though an arched brow betrays what she thought of the traveler’s laughter.

    “My apologies,” the traveler cries. “I passed road-weary days ago.”

    Regina boasts, “We’ve got a stew certain to revive anyone.”

    “Sounds like a bowl of Heaven,” the traveler croons.

    Regina’s smile reveals a bizarre irony that unsettles the traveler. Before Regina makes for the kitchen, she asks, as a passing curiosity, “What’s your destination?” The traveler replies, “It’s indeterminate.”

    “Destinations can be tricky,” Regina warns.

    Scanning the room, something strikes the traveler: The paradoxical look that came over Regina when he idiomatically called her dinner recommendation a bowl of Heaven was apparent on everyone’s face. Next, a man, abandoning a hand of solitaire, rises from his seat and marches toward the kitchen. As he approaches, he wavers, sighs, then disappears beyond the swinging doors.    

    “Who was that man?” the traveler asks Regina.

    “George. He’s been here for years. Had a friend with whom he played chess, but the friend moved on. Lately, George has resigned himself to solitaire.”

    “George is permitted in the kitchen?”

    “No one is unless summoned by the cook,” Regina explains.

    “I didn’t hear George’s name called.”

    Assuagingly, Regina warns the traveler, “You weren’t listening.”

    The farcicality of The Snowshoe as a waiting room where souls gather before being granted passage into Heaven unsettles the traveler, as does the existential catastrophe of his having failed to survive his journey.

    Familiarity lilts in chorus. Was death a shared experience? Some seem too reconciled for their demises to have been recent affairs; they view death as a humorous irony, an escape from a fraught world, while others regard the swinging doors with misgiving. The traveler dispels what he resolves are illusory thoughts and settles on The Snowshoe as a stopover for travelers in need of revival.

    Regina reappears with a bowl of stew. The traveler asks, “Why am I the only one eating?”

    Regina explains, “You’re the only one who requires sustenance.”

    Before the traveler’s twisted expression elicited an explanation, someone rose, tossed aside a newspaper for which they were grateful to no longer feign interest, and marched toward the kitchen.

    “Was he summoned by the cook?”

     Regina nods.

    “Will the cook summon me?” the traveler warily peeps.

    “What’s your name?” Regina asks.

    “Melcior,” the traveler replies. “I’ve searched for whatever sanguinity a forbidding world affords. I’m following a star.”

    “Two came before you,” said Regina. “Caspar and Belthazaar. They, too, are following a star. You’ll meet in Bethlehem. There, you’ll kneel before He who was foretold. Make haste, Melcior, for the day of rejoicing is upon us.”

 

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As America pivots from embittered passions over her Vietnam initiative to Cold War anxiety, the stars align for three teens seeking independence, encountering the unimaginable.

Set in Philadelphia in the mid-1970s, American Odyssey chronicles the coming-of-age journey of Addison Caldwell, Cillian James, and Joey Brosco. In their quest for independence, the trio encounters the recently widowed Leila Bennett, a former prostitute turned farm owner. For Leila, a sultry summer blossoms into an odyssey of hope and healing; for the boys, work and awakening. Leila—a girl discarded and rescued—teaches the threesome that virtue does not lie in the struggle for independence or what one must sacrifice for its behalf, but in love that reinforces enduring friendship.

 

Michael DeStefano runs a hairstyling salon, where he has spent the past four decades beautifying the super of Philadelphia. His past titles include the historical family saga “The Gunslinger Companion,” the comedy/tragedy “Waiting for Grandfather,” and “The Bohemian.” You can find these novels and the short stories, “Eternity’s Corridor”, “A Requiem for Oliver Clinch,” and other writing at https://michaelscorner.blog

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Background of the Book by Mark A Hill – Guest Blog and Giveaway

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Background of the Book

I have always written, whether it be poetry, lessons, courseware or angry notes on the fridge to my wife and son. Writing is an emotional release, a way of saying things that you don’t have the time or energy to express during the working day.

I have had my poetry published in several collections and literary journals. I have written two somewhat complex, obscure novels and notwithstanding the many compliments on my style and the kind words received, I’d had difficulty in finding a willing publisher. Besides, I guess you never know if someone is really complimenting you when you receive a selection of rejections. I decided that I needed a more structured approach to writing so I decided I would write a crime novel.

In 2019, I was teaching a group of judges and ex-judges in Bologna. It was a state sponsored courses that certain Italian institutions organise for privileged social groups and during those lessons, we started to talk about the Bologna massacre of 1980. That year, there was a terrorist bombing of Bologna Centrale railway station, which killed 85 people and injured over 200. It was Italy’s most serious terrorist attack. Although several members of the neo-fascist terrorist organization Nuclei Armati Rivoluzionari (NAR, Armed Revolutionary Nuclei) were subsequently sentenced for the bombing, there is still a lot of controversy over who was actually responsible. Some commentators accuse the far right, some accuse the far left. The secret services of several countries and many foreign terrorist groups have been investigated.

I did a lot of reading around the subject and decided that the whole incident was so compelling and there were so many conspiracy theories that reverberated around it, that there was probably enough material for a novel.
So, with a little dose of reality and a whole lot of imagination, I set about writing. I created the classic private investigator character, the villain, Carlos the Jackal, the corrupt Italian politician couldn’t go amiss. Who’s not going to identify with that? A little bit of love interest and off I went.

I disciplined myself to recount a straightforward narrative in chronological order, with a basic structure, using simple ideas and style. It is an attempt to narrate events in a more disciplined way than I had used in the past, I tried to eradicate any complex descriptive passages in a more high-flown poetic style. When I edited and it sounded like I was showing off, I just eliminated the offending paragraph and rewrote it as I actually perceived it, like I saw it happening step by step, in front of me.

I remember that year I was free 3 or 4 mornings a week and I just leaned into it. I’d write in streams and just throw the ideas down and then work back through, correcting the dialogues and description, the structure, the punctuation and spelling. It took me about three months to get a first draft. I remember I was quite free at that time in the mornings and able to throw myself into it without any great personal sacrifice. Whenever I am creating something that is fun, I don’t regard the time as ever being wasted.

Finishing the first draft is always a worrying moment because you risk thinking that the hard work is done. Personally, I find it much more difficult to rewrite rather than to write. You have to be relatively harsh on yourself and willing to bin whole chunks if they’re not up to standard. Revise, revise, revise is not bad advice.
I sent the novel to Wallace Publishing and they agreed to take it on. After some intense editing, the COVID years and a series of other bureaucratic setbacks, the book came out in July this year.

As an aside, in September my collected poems were published by Hidden Hand Press so, at the moment, I am promoting both books.

Mitchell Rose and the Bologna Massacre is a crime story that explores the last fifty years of cross-fertilisation between the Italian criminal underworld, its secret services, politics and the judicial system.

When Mitchell Rose is called to Milan by Remo Rhimare, a local judge who wants him to investigate the Bologna bombing of 1980, he knows it would make more sense to turn the job down.

To make things even more complicated, Rhimare also wants Rose to rein in his errant daughter, who is becoming increasingly wayward.

As Rose begins to investigate, the two missions surprisingly become one, culminating in a dreadful dramatic climax.

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I twitched nervously. The will to move out of there and toward the action was strong. I wanted to be an integral part of the scene that I could see reflected there in the mobile phone. Alessandra raised a hand and made a gesture that encouraged me to stay put. In doing so, she touched me softly on the left shoulder with her long fingernails. Being discovered there would put me back to square one. Robuyuki was gonna get his from Cambio’s guards, but I had to stay still, I couldn’t move.

“It’s also my favourite drink.” The chef offered.

“But you don’t drink, Robuyuki.”

Robuyuki lifted the glass to his lips and forced the drink down his neck, licking his lips with satisfaction.

Cambio had been silenced and we heard the clumped, mechanical tramping of feet as they exited the restaurant. Alessandra heaved a sigh of relief and we slowly moved apart. I poured a glass of Grand Marnier into the glass that I had seized and we shared it there in the cellar. The sense of relief was overwhelming and we hugged each other, but without the intensity that there had been between us moments before. There was still a layer of fear that lay like a film across the room, and that fear had rendered us sexless siblings. Robuyuki knocked on the cellar door and we climbed back up and thanked him sincerely.

About the Author:

Mark A. Hill has an Economics degree from the University of Lancaster and both CELTA and DELTA qualifications to teach English to second language learners.

In 2005, in Cagliari, Italy, he founded English Teachers, which offers language services such as English courses, translations and interpreting. He collaborates as a translator and interpreter with the Cagliari Law Courts, several universities throughout Europe, and numerous private and public organizations both in the Cagliari area and throughout Italy.

Every summer, he teaches English for Academic Purposes (EAP) to Postgraduate students at Swansea University in the UK.

Mark A. Hill’s poetry has been published in The UK Poetry Library’s Top Writers of 2012 and the Live Canon 2013 Prize Anthology. He was highly commended in the 2015 Segora Poetry Prize and was short-listed for the Canon 2015 First Collection Prize. In 2016, one of his poems was commissioned, published and performed at The Victoria and Albert Museum, London, for the anniversary of Shakespeare’s death.

Mark A. Hill has also published academic courseware in collaboration with Delfis s.r.l.

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Look Over Your Shoulder by Sharon Overend – Spotlight and Giveaway

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A haunting, lyrical exploration of family, silence and the secrets we inherit.

Years of avoidance and blame have left the McLaughlin clan fractured and ill-equipped to face the critical illness of one of their own. When long buried memories of a neighborhood child’s death while in their care resurface the family truly begin to unravel.

Told in alternating voices, Look Over Your Shoulder, reveals how secrets ripple through generations, and how healing begins when someone finally dares to speak the truth.

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ANNE

I slipped away. In slow motion, I raised one foot after the other, one step at a time, upstairs. My limbs now disconnected from my body, my head bobbing in a black fog, I drifted across the hall and toward my bedroom. I lay on top of the covers but dragged a throw over my hip.

The buzz of distant conversations crawled into the room, and my window shook each time the front door opened or closed. Knuckles rapped, an empty hanger slapped against the door panel, the buzz amplified, feet shuffled forward, a presence lingered, a hand touched my arm, a voice whispered.

“Mom.”

I said nothing until her feet shuffled back toward the door.

“I’m sorry,” I sighed into the pillow seconds before the hanger again rattled, and the hum of voices roared back into the room. I wasn’t sure whether I’d wanted her to hear me or not.

“For what?” She had heard.

“For resenting you.”

The weighty creak of floorboards, a car engine idling, a woman’s laughter, a child’s shriek, a toilet flush.

“You’re tired,” Marilyn said, now close enough to touch me. “Sleep.”

“You scare me,” I said, still telling the pillow, not her. “Your strength and your capacity for forgiveness are things I’ve never experienced before. But I have to know. Have you ever forgotten?” Shame had stalked me my whole life, a shadow dancing across my peripheral vision, now fully in view.

“We’ll talk in the morning.” She lifted the fringed edge of the blanket, pulled it over my shoulder, and tucked it beneath my chin. A blue spark of static electricity sprang between her fingers and my face.

About the Author:

SHARON OVEREND, is an award-winning author whose fiction, creative non-fiction and poetry has appeared in the Canadian, American and British literary journals and anthologies including Antigonish Review, Avalon, Descant, Grain, Matter of Time, Spirit of the Hills, Surfacing, Wild Words, Word Weaver, UK’s Dream Catcher, CafeLit, The Best of CafeLit and A Coup of Owls.

Sharon and her husband live on a 156- rural acre property in Ontario, Canada where she has found inspiration for many of her projects.

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