Everyone! In the Dream! Is You! by Adam Dove


Everyone! In the Dream! Is You! by Adam Dove
Publisher: Last-Picked Books
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Paranormal, Contemporary
Rating: 3 Stars
Reviewed by Astilbe

In these six stories, full of dangerous magic, fragile men, and broken families, Adam Dove explores the macabre reality of masculinity and the lives it destroys.

A teenager becomes trapped in a cyclical dreamscape, turning a high school crush into an absurdist nightmare. A promising sculptor uses a new technique to mold his lover into the perfect woman. A deserted child’s search for his missing father leads him to the sinkhole on the outskirts of town—which his classmates say leads straight to Hell.

Spanning the breadth of genre and blurring the lines between reality, dream, and nightmare, the stories in Everyone! In the Dream! Is You! show us that beneath the hardened shell of masculinity is a broken, wailing humanity, desperate to be free.

Anything is possible in dream-like places.

In “Unstable Ground,” a deserted child’s search for his missing father in a sinkhole quickly spiralled out of control. I loved the dreamlike quality of this tale, especially as the main character wandered further into the sinkhole and discovered things that made this reader shudder. Every layer, both metaphorically and literally, of the underground tunnels and caverns he explored gave another clue about what was happening and made me wonder if my previous assumptions about what was really going on should be reevaluated. This was something I couldn’t stop reading until I knew how it all ended.

“Everyone! In the Dream! Is You!” continued the trend of making this reader feel like I was trapped in a nightmare, but this time the setting was a high school where the rules of physics and biology kept changing so quickly that I had trouble keeping up with what was going on. It would have been helpful to have a more defined plot in this story given how many other aspects of it were different from one scene to the next. This was a pattern that repeated in a few other stories, too, and led me to choose the rating I did.

A rotting, infected tooth caused such horrible pain for a character in “Heap” that he decided to take matters – and maybe even a molar – into his own hands. This opening scene set the stage for an exploration of a relationship that was placid on the surface but filled with mysterious and horrifying twists and turns the moment its surface was scratched. The vivid descriptions in it made me shudder sometimes, but I couldn’t possibly stop reading.

Everyone! In the Dream! Is You! was surreal.

Cryptid Bits by Jess Simms


Cryptid Bits by Jess Simms
Publisher: Last-Picked Books
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Paranormal, Contemporary
Rating: 4 Stars
Reviewed by Astilbe

Cryptids. At the movies and at the bar, cryptids. In china shops and running for office, cryptids. Cryptids, cryptids everywhere.

Mythical beings need to earn a living, too!

The world building was incredible. Getting glimpses of so many different residents, notable spots, and moments in time in this neighborhood gave me a well-rounded understanding of what it would be like to visit The Fairy District if it were a real place. If the author ever decides to write a sequel, I’d love to dive even more deeply into the many different species that call this area home and how they are being affected by human gentrification.

I would have loved to see more character development. Meeting the characters was a memorable experience, but there was never a lot of time to get to know most of them better due to how brief each section was and how many different folks there were to meet. Louise, a local mortician, was one such creature that I wish I could have had more time with as she seemed to have a fascinating life as an undertaker. This pattern was the only thing holding me back from choosing a full five-star review.

Some of this flash fiction was written in the style of online news articles or reviews of different businesses. What made these pieces even more unique were the comments included by various members of the community and visitors who had strong opinions about the event, business, or topic being discussed. I loved the originality of these sections, especially when it came to the many types of feedback that can be shared in such places. A kind commenter might be immediately followed by someone who had a harsher perspective, but the variety of it all made it feel incredibly realistic.

Cryptid Bits was delightfully creative. I can’t wait to read more from this author.