Dona Nobis Pacem (God Grant Us Peace) by Will Okati
Publisher: Changeling Press
Genre: Dark Romance, LGBTQ, Mystery/Suspense/Thriller, Historical
Rating: 5 Stars
Reviewed by AstilbeDona Nobis Pacem. God Grant Us Peace.
Voiceless Donnell and defrocked priest Nathan are outcasts and strangers at the turn of the century. Despite his handicap, Donnell has made a life for himself as a businessman and owner of a saloon. His heart goes out to those whom life has dealt an unhappy hand. When Nathan arrives in this former gold-rush town, horsewhipped and ill to the point of collapse, Donnell is the only one to offer help.
Barely ordained before being accused of unnatural desires, Nathan has been sent to travel a faux road to Damascus as penance. He did not expect to survive the trek, and longed for the peace he might find when his body gave up the fight.
He never expected to meet someone like Donnell. Despite his lack of voice, Donnell is the teacher Nathan has hungered for all his life, and the lover he never dared seek out. Triumphing over a lifetime’s worth of threatened damnation will not be easy to overcome, but Donnell’s not giving up. The passion they share is what both men have always craved, but never found. When they’re discovered, standing together is the only thing that will save them both.
Peace comes in many forms.
Donnell and Nathan had sizzling chemistry that was evident from the very first time they met. Seeing those sparks between them slowly develop into something much deeper was rewarding and is exactly the kind of pacing I love to see in this genre. While they had wildly different backgrounds in certain ways, both men shared some things in common that I wasn’t necessarily expecting to find. This only made me root for them even more strongly than I already was.
The strong and memorable world building made me briefly wonder if this were part of a series, but it does seem to be a standalone work after all. I particularly appreciated how much time was spent explaining the origins of Nazareth, the small community where Donnell was born and raised. Little details like this went a long way in not only explaining why some residents behaved the way that the did but also helped to round out the main character’s backstory and personality in ways that other readers should discover for themselves.
What ultimately convinced me to give this a full five-star rating was the ending. Not only did it wrap up all of the conflicts satisfactorily, it gave readers some strong hints about what to expect from these characters in the future regardless of whether not we ever get a sequel about them. While I’d want to be the first person in line to read more about them, I was also quite satisfied with how everything ended and thought the author did a great job of wrapping it all up.
Dona Nobis Pacem (God Grant Us Peace) was everything I wanted it to be and then some!















