Naomi’s Sexy Thanksgiving by Ruby Stallion
Publisher: Passion Patch Books
Genre: Contemporary, Holiday
Length: Short Story (20 pages)
Other: M/F, Multiple Partners, Masturbation
Rating: 2 stars
Reviewed by Nymphaea
When a small town girl goes to the big city to focus on her career, she quickly realizes the differences between the people and her small town and the people in the big city. Especially the men!
All Naomi wanted was a Thanksgiving romance. What starts off as a woman settling for someone because she didn’t want to be alone during the holiday winds up being a sexy story of an erotic love triangle between her former love in her small home town and her new big city lover. Self-pleasure, good looking people, holiday spirit and the erotic fantasy mind of Ruby Stallion makes this a good erotic story.
She’s going to make this Thanksgiving one for the record books.
I hadn’t read a book by Ruby Stallion before this one, but I’ve remedied that. This book is definitely original.
Naomi wants a lover who loves her. Seems simple, but in the big city, she seems to find a lot of thorns among the roses. The premise of the story is plausible and interesting.
But I had a few quibbles. First, the tense of the book switched a few times which ripped me out of plot. I had to reread more than a few times. Then there was the way Naomi conducted herself. I’m no prude, but she seemed to waiver a lot. With a bit more editing, this could be a great little story. I realize this is part of a series and is probably best read in order. I say that because the ending seemed a tad too abrupt. Just… done. While this might not deter some readers, especially if it’s known going in that it’s part of series, it was a stumbling block for me.
That said, I did root for Corey. He seemed like he head his head screwed on straight and his heart in the right place. I don’t know what’s next for him, but I hope he gets his own book.
If you want an erotic short story that packs a holiday punch, then this might be the read for you.