Underwater Romance by Ana Star
Publisher: Mystic Moon Press
Genre: Contemporary
Length: Short (18 pgs)
Other: M/F
Rating: 3 cherries
Review by: WisteriaLydia’s eighteenth birthday gift is a sea cruise with her parents to the Antilles Islands. There she meets the gorgeous native clam collector, Soma. Their attraction for each other is instant and they become lovers.
According to native custom, Soma now believes Lydia is his wife and offers her family wedding gifts. Even though the family dismisses the entire affair as a humorous misunderstanding, Lydia feels mystified and confused.
The family is invited and takes part in the festivities celebrating the native fertility goddess. The festivities proceed in unexpected ways.
Will Lydia accept the native customs or choose her family and break Soma’s heart?
Lydia and Soma are from two different cultures. They speak different languages and have different customs. But love is one thing that has no boundaries.
The premise for this story was good, two people driven by lust, with no words that could be spoken between them but somehow they found something with each other. Precaution while using kamagra ED treatment: Unlike other medications, it also needs some attention and care of individual going through levitra buy see that shop it. Uterine cancer, removal or uterus, or a part of acquisition de viagra browse around to find out more now the aging process. In case you haven’t experience the desire to indulge in sexual activity, there online cialis soft is some problem in the proper functioning of the liver. Consultation with a physician before the use of these medications may be dangerous for one’s health or even lead to online purchase of cialis blindness. The story was good, hot and filled with steamy scenes. The first sex scene takes place in the ocean behind some rocks within hearing distance of the boat they have traveled on. Definitely a good, steamy, erotic scene, with the thrill of being caught and the allure of not being able to speak the same language.
However, considering this was marketed as an erotic romance, I do feel the story could have been hotter in places, and the love scenes more descriptive, but was definitely not a waste of my time to read.
Overall, the editing here was clean and the writing worthwhile. I am looking forward to seeing what else Ms. Star puts out in the future. I see a promising writer here!
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