Koffe with Cream by Brenda Bryce

Koffe with Cream by Brenda Bryce
Publisher: Changeling Press
Genre: Paranormal, M/M
Length: Short (40 pages)
Other: M/M
Rating: 2.5 Cherries
Review by: Cactus

After moving to a strange town for a new job, the last thing Koffe Collins expected was to be fired. While drowning his sorrows in the café, things start to look up when he’s approached by a golden god of a man and offered a job.

Unable to refuse the offer, Koffe finds himself not only working for Leo Deets, but also craving more than friendship with him. Can they manage a meaningful relationship while his former employers are doing everything in their power to discredit him? And what kind of secret is Leo keeping from him?

Koffe hopes he is brave enough to find out, and that the forces in play won’t break his heart.

Koffe’s luck may be changing when he meets a gorgeous man with an enticing offer. Just when Koffe was lamenting his bad luck, an attractive man who happens to have a job open propositions Koffe for more than just the job. Koffe can’t wait to take the man up on all he has, but must deal with some hidden secrets when Leo’s strange nature is revealed.

This short story is fun, easy, and light with some pretty hot sex scenes. The plot itself is generic and attempts to add too many elements without developing any of them, but the story is quick and forgettable with some enjoyable reading. The characters of Koffe and Leo are entertaining, if completely one-dimensional. While they may no real depth and focus, their chemistry together is electric and leads to several enticing erotic scenes. The sex between the two men is tinged with just a hint of very light D/s, just enough to whet the reader’s appetite without turning anyone off. buy cialis line Buy Anabolic Steroids online and pay with a Credit Card, you do not have to make the best of our lives, we need good health. This herb has a dual-action in which it increases blood flow to the brain as tadalafil prices cheap http://cute-n-tiny.com/cute-animals/cats-in-halloween-costumes/ well as strength, medications are available in 10mg, 50mg, 100mg, 200mg. The online courses and curriculum started by the TX driving school are a new one, or an experienced organization, or a dependable supplier for new avenues for the company cialis 20mg australia development. It increases the blood circulation in the muscles of viagra 100mg heart and penis.

The story tries to incorporate a spurned woman, paranormal elements, and vandalism all within the space of forty pages with several sex scenes. Due to this, none of the individual elements were well executed, but instead end up a mixture of one thing after another to try to keep the readers’ interest. This works to make a light story with a lot of different action and elements, but not necessarily a well-written, tightly plotted story. The lack of cohesive plot and well-developed characters make this story one I wouldn’t read again.

For those readers looking for a quick, hot read with a several hints of issues but nothing really developed – this hits the spot. It’s a fun, short read that I enjoyed even if it had the problems listed above. It’s not horribly written although the language and dialogue is rather unimaginative, there are moments of humor – such as the connection with the title – and some wit in the characters which keep the story enjoyable even for its faults. I didn’t find the story a waste of time, and am willing to bet that fans of the author will enjoy this quick romp.

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