My Protector Part 2 by Stephanie Burke

My Protector Part 2 (Angel Falls) by Stephanie Burke
Publisher: Changeling Press LLC
Genre: Paranormal, Contemporary
Length: Short Story (80 pages)
Other: M/F, Anal Sex, Toys
Rating: 2 stars
Reviewed by Ginger

Crippled without his Shadow Self, Richard must protect Amber from the darkness of her past.

For the first time in his life, Richard’s Shadow Self has abandoned him. Worse, a rogue Hunter has it imprisoned. Growing progressively weaker, Richard must protect Angel Falls from mysterious goings-on in the woods, convince Amber she’s his soul-mate, and reunite with his Shadow Self. But when Amber’s past catches up to her, he might not have the strength to be her protector.

My Protector Part 2 picks up where part one leaves off with Amber and Richard in Angel Falls on a robbery call. They end up not really investigating the robbery but instead sharing their past life events and current feelings. Richard confesses his feelings and desire for Amber and it seems the robbery was forgotten, and finding his shadow wolf wasn’t a priority.

The author has a talent and skill for writing however the story wasn’t the best plot wise. It has potential and the idea behind the plot idea intrigued me, but wasn’t fully investigated.  Instead, the main plot seemed more based on Amber and Richard mating, with bits of Amber’s prior marriage and the skin hunters just thrown in to add some additional filling.

I was frustrated, too, with Amber.  Her low self-esteem about her body was a mood killer. Richard is ready to mate and she continuously wants to point out that her breast aren’t firm, that she has stretch marks and that her underwear doesn’t match.

I have nothing negative to say about the author’s skill, however.  It is obvious the author has many entertaining stories to tell, but to me this story needs more structural development. I’d absolutely be willing to give more of her work a try.

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