Her Husband’s Army Buddy by Doris O’Connor


Her Husband’s Army Buddy by Doris O’Connor
Publisher: Evernnight Publishing
Genre: Contemporary
Length: Short Story (113 pages)
Other: MF, MMF, MM, MFM, BDSM, Spanking, Anal play/intercourse, Menage
Rating: 3.5 stars
Reviewed by Honeysuckle

There should only ever be two people in a marriage…

Sandy McLeod has been perfectly happy in her D/s relationship with her husband Zane for the last ten years. Until his old army buddy re-enters their life.

Sean Manson is altogether too handsome, too virile, far too much of anything. The man oozes dominance, danger, and leashed aggression, and Sandy can’t help but respond to him. Neither can Zane. He walked away from Sean once. Now, he’s back, long suppressed feelings bubble to the surface and cannot be denied. When Sandy agrees to a threesome, happiness seems within their grasp. Sean’s demons, however, threaten to destroy everything they hold dear.
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Sean never meant to come between husband and wife, let alone hurt either one of them. Surely, the only solution is to walk away from them both. When you’re the missing piece, however, walking is simply not an option.

If two’s company, can adding a third make them more or will it destroy them all?

This short story starts and ends on very similar, really hot notes. This isn’t a slow building heat, it’s an atomic explosion that had my e-reader smoking at the edges. That can be a good thing, because, yes, it grabbed my attention quick but, it can also be a not so good thing. It’s not that the heat ever really dies down, tho there is a situation that happens that banks it for a bit, it’s that it feels like the author took a small chunk of the characters relationship and only shared that teaser. Again, super hot teaser, but teaser non the less.

The story is good. Sandy and Zane are seemingly happily married but she begins to suspect that something is off. It’s not until she meets Zane’s bit of history, in the form of dominant, Sean Manson, that she sees that it isn’t just off, something (or rather someone) is missing. Sean comes with some baggage that felt very realistic and heartbreaking. I liked Sandy’s response to his condition and Zane, bless his heart, is torn between the two people he both loves and desires.

The author has so much potential in this short to expound of their story. I wanted to see and feel the connection between Zane and Sean, prior to Sandy entering the picture. They seemed to be so close and then Zane meets Sandy, is married for ten years and then Sean re-enters the picture. The author explains where he was but I’d like to know how he and Zane were coping without each other. Maybe this story is supposed to simply highlight the culmination of them not being able to deny themselves any longer but also how Zane has desire and love for his wife as well. It’s complicated but I thought the author did a good job of giving them their story.

There are a few grammar issues that could be corrected in a future re-release. Major, in that the heroes names are switched at one point (says Sean and should have been Zane) and then another place where incorrect pronouns are used. Not story killers by any means but worth fixing if the book is updated or expanded on later. I enjoyed this story and wouldn’t hesitate to pick up another book by Ms. O’Connor. She has a good grasp on the D/s lifestyle.

I appreciated that this story gives voices to retired military and what problems often stay with them long after they separate. That was realistically depicted and discussed both honestly and respectfully. An easy recommend.

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