Crowns and Criminals by Kayla Bain-Vrba

Crowns and Criminals by Kayla Bain-Vrba
Publisher: Torquere Books
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Length: Short Story (29 pages)
Other: M/M
Rating: 3 stars
Reviewed by Nymphaea

When Noble, a common thief, rescues a cursed prince to clear his own name, the last thing on his mind is falling in love. True love, however, is at the top of Prince Danson’s to-do list; hence why he had himself cursed and locked away in a tower in the first place. The trying journey home brings them closer together, but are the secrets from their past powerful enough to rip them apart forever?

You never know what you’ve got until its gone–or when he’s not what you expect.

Crowns and Criminals is an interesting short story. Its a different take on the fairy tale. I did like the characters–Danson and Noble. Danson is every fairy tale princess come to life, but as a man. He’s got everything, but he’s not happy. That said, he’s understandable. He wants his happily ever after and isn’t afraid to go to crazy lengths to get it. I respected him. I honestly liked Noble, too. He’s a tad more flawed, but it worked for him. I liked the tension between them and the sweet way the romance blossomed. Bain-Vrba has a nice way with words.

Now I did have a teensy qualm with this story. I thought the action moved rather quickly, but I could overlook that because it’s a short story. The ending though…it needed something. It seemed rushed. Like there was a set page length and the author couldn’t go over. I got emotionally involved with the characters and wanted to see the way the ending played out, rather than being told.

Still, this is a good fairy tale and a fresh take on the rescue scenario. I look forward to more from Bain-Vrba.

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