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Moonlighting by Kris Eton
The Wilder Rose Press Scarlet Rose
Contemporary
Short Story, M/F
Review by Poppy

 

 
Kara just wanted to buy the sexiest dress she could find to wear to her divorce hearing. Instead, she finds herself alone in a department store with Jack, the most gorgeous security guard she's ever seen. What starts out as a misunderstanding, leads to the hottest sex of her life. Will fate bring them together again or will this just be a one-night stand that leaves them both wanting more?

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Hot, hot, hot!  Who hasn't fantasized about hot sex with an even hotter stranger?  And Ms. Eton does a fabulous, stimulating job showing this reader just how exciting a forbidden rendezvous like that might be.

Kara starts the evening simply looking for a sexy dress to make her soon-to-be-ex-husband eat his heart out.  But she loses track of the time, and ends up staying in the store after it closes.  When Jack, a cop moonlighting as a security guard, finds her half-clothed in one of the dressing rooms, he assumes she's a shoplifter.  Ready to haul her off to jail, he's surprised ... and turned on... when Kara accidentally drops her hold on her dress.  I could completely picture her getting frustrated and throwing her hands up in annoyance without remembering that she had hold of her bodice.  Whoops!

Kara, too, is all hot and bothered, and suggests to Jake that she might need to be frisked.  One thing leads to...the hottest sex either has ever had.  Jake wants her number, but Kara is mortified and just wants to escape.

This was a very well-written erotic tale with plenty of heat, and surprising humor (wait until you see what happens to the ex!).  I had only one complaint--and it will sound ambiguous in an attempt to avoid a spoiler--but in my opinion the hero's...hmm...behavior jumped the gun a bit at the end.  Still, that aside, I thoroughly enjoyed this story.  If you're looking for a fun, steamy, well-written erotic romance then I highly recommend "Moonlighting".  In fact, I enjoyed it so much, I ran to check if the author had any more stories available!

 
 
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